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If you are asking your students to maintain a writer's notebook to improve their own writing process, then you should be keeping one too!
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My history with journals/writer's notebooks: I began with journals in 1991--my first year of teaching. I had taken a methods class at my university that stressed the importance of having students keep journals to record daily ideas for potential writing. I said, "Why not?" and every student writer from day one maintained a spiral-bound "journal" for me. Most tossed their journals in the trash on the last day of class; they could have cared less about the ideas they'd recorded there, and yet I continued to this daily practice for those first few years. To be perfectly honest, journal-keeping was ten minutes of "busy work" that allowed me to take care of attendance and set up the classroom's lesson for the day. It never occurred to me during those early years that my students might care more about their journals if I had one to show them where I recorded daily ideas.
In 1998, thanks to my journalism students' hard work, I won a month-long, summer fellowship from C-SPAN in Washington, D.C., and the first thing they asked me to do upon arrival was to keep a daily journal that documented my experience. Since college, I had not kept my own journal; I asked my students to keep theirs, but I was not doing it alongside them, nor had I ever shown them one of my past journals. Maintaining that C-SPAN daily journal was an eye-opening experience for me. I really went the extra mile as I kept it too; I illustrated my daily entries (with my "Mr. Stick" character that I had recently begun using in class), and added lots of visuals with glue and tape. It's quite fun to look through. So many years later, I have probably re-read each day's entry from that fellowship close to a hundred times, and I am always floored by all the really good thinking I was doing back then. When I returned to my classroom that August, I showed and shared from my summer journal every day during the first month of school. My kids were hooked; they wanted to keep journals too, and they wanted their to be just as visual as mine. Because I could explain my own thinking process based on each page I shared with them, they were so much more willing to put deeper thought into their journals. I was floored at the difference in my students' attitudes about their journals that school year. Only a few threw theirs away that school year; several years later, I would guess that none of my students felt their journals were worth so little that they considered dropping them in the trash. If you click the image from my C-SPAN journal pictured here, you can see it in larger form.
While I slowly learned to enjoy and value the process of keeping a journal that I could share with my students, I also realized that I didn't much care for the traditional feel that comes with a journal. The whole "Dear Diary" feel, the whole "Here's what happened to me today..." expectation began to bother me; I wanted to have a spiral-bound place to record ideas for future writing assignments, but I didn't need the process to feel so traditional. In 2005, I began discovering that people were writing about a new type of journal--a "Writer's Notebook"--which allowed students to be recklessly creative as they explored potential writing ideas from class. The three mentor texts at right remain the best three I have found. In 2006, I began my very first writer's notebook.
These days in class, thanks to the amazing suggestions from Ralph Fletcher and Aimee Buckner, I have become a writer's notebook "junkie." Each class session begins with 10 minutes of SWT--"Sacred Writing Time"-- where students begin recording in whatever way they'd like to record new thoughts on topics they might want to write about; they can also continue working on an idea started during a previous session of SWT. My students slowly learn my routine and understand that my expectation is that they are to be listening and looking for writing topics at all times because they have this guaranteed ten minutes of time as soon as my class begins. Once the practice has been established, they begin walking through the world with a different set of eyes. They observe the world with "writer's eyes." I have baskets in class where students can safely stow their notebooks at the end of each class, but many of my students take theirs home so they can immediately write down new ideas as they come to them. Because I show them mine regularly, and because I take extra care adding color and visuals to my pre-writing, most of them do this too.
I consider our writer's notebooks to be the place where most of our pre-writing is stored. Once a week, on our writer's workshop day, they have time to take one of their ideas from a notebook page through the writing process. Each semester (18 weeks), my students are required to take three or four of their writer's notebook ideas through all steps of the writing process (pre-writing, drafting, response, revision, editing, publishing). Our writer's workshop is the true cornerstone of my project-based classroom, and it all begins by helping students value the keeping of a writer's notebook.
My students are passionate about their writer's notebooks too; I am convinced they care about their notebooks because they see that I keep and care for mine too. My workshop approach to teaching the writing process is totally dependent on the fact that my students explore personal writing ideas daily in a less-structured, more-learning-style-friendly format. I couldn't have my writer's workshop if my students didn't have guaranteed daily time in their writer's notebooks.
If you don't have a writer's notebook you're keeping to show your students, then begin one. Don't hesitate about this; simply, do it. It makes all the difference.
Students need to truly "own" their notebooks, to see them as a storehouse for interesting things they think about as well as a place to develop an independent "style." Over the years, I have discovered many tricks for helping my new students--most of whom have never even heard of a writer's notebooks when they come to me--to become independent topic-seekers and conveyers of style. My students eventually all arrive at a place where their notebooks are completely their own, but they arrive at different times.
Writer's Notebook Bingo Cards: Over the summer of 2011, my wonderful wife--Dena Harrison, who is also a teacher--and I created a really great resource that we are using to help our students understand the unique expectations of a writer's notebook. On the first day of each month, our students receive a new "Writer's Notebook Bingo Card," which has twenty-four topic/thinking suggestions that could inspire a notebook entry during "Sacred Writing Time." We wrote the topics to not only appeal to a wide variety of learning styles but also to encourage students to explore writing topics for the three genres of writing we teach: persuasive, expository, and narrative. My students earn a sticker if they make a "five-in-a-row Bingo" or a "four corners." In truth, I don't really want my students using more than five ideas from the Bingo Card each month; I want them to come in to my class with a personal topic they have independently thought of and are itching to write down. The Bingo Card certainly helps them on days they just don't have a topic, but it also shows a variety of techniques students can make use of so the writing isn't just a bunch of block paragraphs.
The center square of our nine Writer's Notebook Bingo Cards--instead of being a "Free Space" as it would be in a real game of Bingo--is a writer's notebook lesson I do with all of my students. In my classroom, we begin the "center-square lesson" during the first week of the month, and by the end of the month, I expect students to have developed the idea into an interesting, thoughtfully-illustrated demonstration of unique thinking. Now Ralph Fletcher--truly one of my personal heroes--and I would probably butt heads over this idea; in his books about writer's notebooks (all of which are amazing!), he strongly cautions that notebooks should not be used as places where students record teacher-assigned writing. Once a month, however, I have come to believe that it's okay. As I developed the nine different lessons found in the nine different cards' center squares, I tried to make lessons that have my students experiment with a format or creative way of writing that just might inspire future independent entries from the kids.
Dena and I actually sell our Writer's Notebook Bingo Cards from our website's; the money we make from the sales helps us keep both our websites on-line and free-to-use. You can access our September Writer's Notebook Bingo Card below for free, which also gives you access to the "Center Square Lesson" for that month: Alpha-Genres. If you are interested in purchasing the entire set of nine Bingo Cards, please click here for details; when you purchase, you not only receive the cards in PDF (Adobe Acrobat) format, but I'll also send them in Microsoft Word format, giving you the ability to edit the cards. Only purchasers of the whole set gain access to all nine of the "Center Square Lessons" we created.
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Mentor Texts that Influence my Use of Writer's Notebooks:
If you appreciate the lessons I am freely posting here at my website, kindly consider using the links below to purchase the mentor texts I am recommending; a very small percentage of each sale from Amazon helps me keep this website free and on-line for all to use. Thanks in advance in helping me out! |

A Writer's Notebook: Unlocking the Writer in You by (the great!) Ralph Fletcher
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Our Very First Writer's Notebook Bingo Card and its "Center-Square Lesson" |
Below, I freely share our September Writer's Notebook Bingo Card with you, as well as a link to the whole-class lesson that is referred to in the center box of the card. Click on the card to be able to print a complimentary copy to try out with your students; you will also receive additional information on the other eight cards in the complete set. Ordering information can be found below.
The Whole Set of Bingo Cards is Available! |
Interested in obtaining our entire set of Bingo Cards? All proceeds from the sales of these copyrighted cards help Dena and I keep our educational websites on-line and free of advertising. When you order the set, you will receive nine cards: 216 different topics (all editable if you have Microsoft Word) as well as exclusive access to all nine of "Center Square Lessons." I only can accept PayPal orders at this time. When you order, it may take me up to forty-eight hours to send you the link where you'll download the set of cards to your own computer; I am a full-time teacher, folks, and I sometimes do not have the ability to send you the download link on the same day that you order. Thanks for understanding. Be sure to contact me if you do not hear back from me in forty-eight hours.
Northern Nevada teachers, NNWP Consultants, and parents of my students: Dena and I certainly do not charge any Northern Nevada colleagues who've taken any of our inservice workshops or anyone who's an active consultant for the Northern Nevada Writing Project. We also will happily share this resource with our students' parents, if you're interested in helping your child write more at home. Simply e-mail either of us, and we'll send you the notebook cards to your district e-mail address, your UNR e-mail address, or your home e-mail address.
Contact me (corbett@corbettharrison.com) if you have questions about this product before ordering! |
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Here is the teacher-guided lesson referred to in the September card's center box:
The ABC's of Things You
Might Write This Year
inspired by Susan Allen and Jane Lindaman's Written Anything Good Lately?
After discussing the cited mentor text (at left)--an alphabet book that explores different forms, modes, and genres that writing can take in a classroom--students spend one or two weeks at the beginning of the school year slowly and thoughtfully creating their own alpha-lists of types/forms of writing they would be willing to create during the upcoming year of writing.
When all students have brainstormed a complete and unique alpha-list, they then devote a two-page spread in their writer's notebooks to neatly publish and decorate their lists. Over a week's time, they illustrate their lists when they have a free moment or two in class.
Once a classroom writer's workshop has been established, this two-page spread can be revisited whenever students are seeking a new idea for a writing assignment. The nine Writer's Notebook Bingo Cards I created to use in my classroom each month of the school year, they all have a box that asks students to refer back to this two-page spread in their notebooks. Click here to freely access this entire lesson here at my website.
Variation of this idea: instead of brainstorming different forms/modes/genres of writing, students can brainstorm different topics they'd be willing to write about and create their two-page spread from that pre-writing exercise.
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Eleven Favorite Pages from my Own Writer's Notebook and the On-line Lessons that Inspired Them |
I'll say it again, and I'll say it dogmatically: If you're asking students to keep writer's notebooks, you should keep a writer's notebook as well. Too many students go through school without ever seeing their own teachers do any writing. If you're looking to have an authentic writing atmosphere in your classroom, then your kids need to know you write too, and they need to give you feedback on the writing you've done.
Now, I don't pretend that I write in my notebook daily. I do give myself challenges though to keep my notebook growing. During the 2010-11 school year, for example, I challenged myself to add a new notebook page to my own notebook once a month based on some of the lessons I had built for or had seen at the WritingFix website. It was a good personal challenge for me that helped me add eleven great new pages to my writer's notebook. Here are the eleven notebook pages I added during the 2010-11 school year.
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The Evolution of an Idea: How a Writer's Notebook Entry can Launch the Writing Process |
Great final drafts begin in well-maintained writer's notebooks. This is what I try to model for my students. Being back in the classroom this year after being on a special assignment for several years has been a fabulous-yet-stressful change for me: fabulous because I have the most amazing students but stressful because I am determined to model new pieces of writing for them based on things that are actually happening to me right now. I could pull out some old pieces of process writing from a few years back and recycle them, but the last time I was sharing writing with my own students was before I had been truly introduced to writer's notebooks.
Throughout the year, I will be taking numerous pieces through the writing process. I want my students to see how writing changes as it moves from a writer's notebook to a rough draft, and how writing changes when it's truly revised by the writer based on feedback.
Here, I will be sharing original pages and ideas from my writer's notebook and all successive drafts so that my students can see that the writing process is not simply writing the same thing over, just neater and with better spelling skills.
A Persuasive Piece of Writing Inspired by a Penny and an Afternoon Visit to the Bank |
I often begin class with a true story. I amused my students one Wednesday in September with the true tale of how my bank actually made me stand in line for twenty minutes to withdraw a single penny. At my bank, I have occasionally heard other customers "explode" with anger over little things
and threaten to do their banking elsewhere. As I stood in line, I debated whether I should explode when I finally arrived at the front of the line, or if I should make a funny story out of the experience. I chose to go with the funny option, and the page I created in my notebook is below on the left.
On the right-hand side, you can access the process the paper went through as I took it through writer's workshop. I made my writing process very visible to my students.
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Pre-writing #1: First I told the story out-loud to my students, explaining that before I write anything, I like to talk it out as a story. This is a technique I learned from Mr. Borilla, my fourth and fifth grade teacher.
- Pre-writing #2: Next, I shared with them a free-verse poem (pictured at left) I had written in my writer's notebook about the incident. My penny has been taped to the page!
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Rough draft: I next let the piece of writing take shape as a hand-written draft. I purposely made sure the paper was very different than the idea originally in my writer's notebook. I wanted my students to understand that notebooks just hold good ideas; those good ideas may go very different directions when drafting begins.
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Highlighted second draft: As part of the peer-feedback portion of the writer's workshop, students highlighted each other's drafts using the attached rubric and then discussed whether or not the highlights indicated if the student still had some areas of work to complete.
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My final draft: Based on the goals I set from the highlighted draft and after doing some additional editing, the writing is finalized.
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Evaluation rubric & teacher scoring sheet: I'm not sure I earned a perfect 30 on this paper! Hey students of mine, what score would you have given my final draft? Use the rubric and hand me a scoring sheet, and I'll give you a sticker for your writer's notebook!
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An Expository Piece of Writing Inspired by a Raptor Perched on my Porch |
As part of our Writer's Workshop, I allow my students to choose their own topics, even for their expository requirement. I vehemently encourage them to discover a topic they don't know much about but would like to learn; I'd much rather have a small amount of research than have them write a report on something they already know tons about. With the process you see below, I was modeling how you find an interesting (but not overwhelming) topic that can be researched based on personal interest.
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Pre-writing, part 1: Again, I started my writing process for this next piece as an oral story I told my classes. I let them know I was searching for an expository topic to do some research on, and that I'd had this experience with a bird dive-bombing my wife and I before dusk. Here's a loose transcription of the oral story they heard.
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Pre-writing, part 2: I coincidentally needed to teach my students to highlight and summarize non-fiction articles for a project they had coming up in science class, so I found them an article on-line to practice highlighting with a partner while learning about the kestrel, giving me opportunities to talk more about my own expository topic, reminding them they needed to be finding one too!
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Pre-writing, part 3: I created the pictured writer's notebook page (at left) to show them. I was able to snap a picture of my porch kestrel (which made him pretty mad at me!), and then I created a "rating system" to classify some of the facts I remembered and thought I might use in my own essay.
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Rough draft: I hand-wrote the following rough draft to share, and I purposely used some pretty weak verbs throughout my draft as well as predictable organization.
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Typed Second Draft: I purposely improved my verbs as I typed and revised and tried to lose some of the formulaic-sounding language from my rough draft.
- Rubric: I used this rubric to not only come up with a personal revision plan but also to score my final draft (as well as my students' final drafts).
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A Narrative Piece of Writing Inspired by Animal Farm and a Scientific Process |
My students--like yours--most likely prefer narrative writing over expository and persuasive writing. Sometimes I like to throw them a true challenge with narrative writing, and in fall of 2011, I based my challenge on our study of a recently-studied George Orwell novel.
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Pre-writing, part 1: I had a really smart group of sixth graders in 2011. As we read Animal Farm in November, they showed great interest in the word allegory. Past years' sixth graders were satisfied simply labeling Orwell's novel a big, fat fable, but this year, the kids wanted to talk about writing their own allegories after I introduced that term to them. We'd already brainstormed other historical events (besides that Bolshevik Revolution) that would make interesting allegories, but I wanted to challenge them to think about scientific processes that might inspire interesting allegorical narratives. I had them personify the three rock types as a pre-write for a possible narrative I was considering challenging them with. Here is a particularly fun pre-write from one of those sixth graders.
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Pre-writing, part 2: After playfully personifying "rock people" in our writer's notebooks, I wanted to show my students how I would brainstorm for an allegory based on a scientific process. Here is the notebook page I created to inspire my own "scientific allegory" based on how a solar eclipse occurs.
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Rough draft: I actually showed my sixth graders this draft before I showed them the notebook page (pictured at left) that inspired it because I wanted them to see if they could figure out what I was allegorically representing with just my words, not the pictures. The easily could. They were inspired to write scientific allegories too.
- Final draft: I felt pretty good about my rough draft, so the next and final draft didn't change dramatically. I think that happens some times when you really put a lot of work into your first draft and your pre-write.
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Nine Gifted and Talented Notebook Challenges for my Students Who are Up for a Challenge! |
I am blessed with an abundance of highly gifted and talented learners at my school. As a kid, I was often bored in class with worksheets and silent reading blocks; I was never tested, so I am not sure if I was actually gifted myself, but I've always held a special place in my heart for kids who bore with traditional school easily. The following nine writer's notebook challenges are not assigned. I simply remind my students that they are available, should my students be finished with their assigned work early. I always have numerous students who take me up on these challenges.
September's Challenge:
Homophone Comics

Mentor Text: A Chocolate Moose for Dinner
by Fred Gwynne
A note for my own students: Click on the book cover to read about the challenge, then ask me to see this book if you're up for it!
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October's Challenge:
Blueprint Storyboards

Mentor Text: P.T.A. Night
by Jeremy R. Scott
A note for my own students: Click on the book cover to read about the challenge, then ask me to see this book if you're up for it! |
November's Challenge:
Illustrated Tom Swiftie Puns

Mentor Text: Tom Swift and His Flying Lab
by Victor Appleton II
A note for my own students: Click on the book cover to read about the challenge, then ask me to see this book if you're up for it! |
December's Challenge:
Artistic Neighbors & Angry Letters

Mentor Text: When Pigasso Met Mootisse
by Nina Laden
A note for my own students: Click on the book cover to read about the challenge, then ask me to see this book if you're up for it! |
January's Challenge:
Anagram Comics

Mentor Text: Elvis Lives! and Other Anagrams
by Jon Agee
A note for my own students: Click on the book cover to read about the challenge, then ask me to see this book if you're up for it! |
February's Challenge:
26 Super, Serendipitous Skills & a Story

Mentor Text: Superhero ABC
by Bob McLeod
A note for my own students: Click on the book cover to read about the challenge, then ask me to see this book if you're up for it! |
March's Challenge:
Song Parodies

Mentor Text: Take Me Out of the Bathtub
by Alan Katz
Coming this March!
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April's Challenge:
Illustrated "Sausage Sentences"

Mentor Text: Palindromania!
by Jon Agee
Coming this April! |
May's Challenge:
Coming soon! |
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